感谢大家的踊跃参与和王卓老师的用心点评，第一期的获奖者已经出炉了：
    New life(ID 178448).
    New life将获得500红币的奖励。具体参加者各人评分请看本帖底部.

    第二期挑错题目不是短文，而是句子，而且是我们经常使用的句子,但改起来一点都不简单。这些句子都不是错误句子，只是不够“地道”，太中国风格,不象真正说出来的英语。我们将提供10个句子，请您把它改得更“地道”，更象从美国人嘴里说出来的英语。大家会从中发现什么是“中国风格英语”，什么是“美国风格英语”。没有标准答案，只有更地道的答案，大家可以尽情发挥。我们将邀请BABYLON老师作为本次挑错大赛的评委。时间11月23日---11月29日。

   第二期挑错题目：

1、  Your coat is broken.

2、  Would you mind posting this letter for me ? Yes, certainly.

3、  He becomes better.

4、  We'll have a hearing test tomorrow.

5、  I recommend you to take a long vacation.

6、  It was still bright outside.

7、  Don't step on the grass.

8、  Lend me some money, for instance 500 dollars, Lin

9、  Did you attend college ?

10、 How heavy are you ?

    第一期参与者评分:希望大家继续努力，不段改进自己的英语水平

A+：Newlife  （王卓老师点评： 很好，对文章的理解基本到位，但对有的句子
　　的认识和修改有待斟酌）

A：快乐相随 、  韵寒  （王卓老师点评：不错，有自己的想法，对有些句子理
　　解不到位，以至于在修改时把意思换掉了）

A- ：xiaoyanjing 、dora liu 、 Lily 

B：Lulu 、 alice 、free_cat 、victoria 、toby2235

[本帖最后由 向日葵 于 2007-11-23 14:58 编辑]

1、  Your coat is broken.

     ----Your coat has been worn out.

2、  Would you mind posting this letter for me ? Yes, certainly.

     ----Would you mind posting this letter for me?  My pleasure.

3、  He becomes better.

     ----He is becoming himself./ He is getting recovered.

4、  We'll have a hearing test tomorrow.

     ----There is a listening test tomorrow.

5、  I recommend you to take a long vacation.

     ----Why not take a vacation for some time?

6、  It was still bright outside.

     ----It was not too late.

7、  Don't step on the grass.

     ----Stay/Keep away from the grass.

8、  Lend me some money, for instance 500 dollars, Lin

     ----Lin, could you please lend me some money around 500 dollars?

9、  Did you attend college ?

     ----Did you take college education?

10、 How heavy are you ?

     ----What is your weight?

you coat is worn out

[本帖最后由 New Life 于 2007-11-29 22:05 编辑]